Kuch iss tarha…

Tumhari hansi ke mod pe mud gayi zindagi kuch iss tarha,

ke jaise udasi ki rah pe wo kabhi chali hi na thi.

tumhari aankhon ke bhanwar main doob gayi zindagi kuch iss tarha,

ke jaise anchuue sapnoon ke sagar main kabhi bahi hi na thi…

Ab tak to dhadkanain chalti hi thi lamhoon ki raah pe,

Saansoon ki ungali thame, chupchaap dabe paanv se.

tumhari aane ki aahat se wo ungali chuda ke bhagi hai kuch iss tarha,

jaise humkadam wo saansoon ki kabhi bani hi na thi…

Soote to the hum kuch iss tarha nashe main,

ke sapnoon ke aane ki hulchul kabhi suni na thi.

tere sapnoon ne aakar nashe ko sataya hai kuch iss tarha,

jaise meri neend tere sapnoon ke bina lagi hi na thi…

Kabhi narm na the meri in aankhoon ke patthar,

in aankhoon ne kabhi aansuoon ki aahat suni na thi.

tumhe khone ke khayal se beh chale hain aansoon kuch iss tarha,

jaise meri aankhoon main inki kami hi na thi…

Kyun chali gayi ho tum mujhe chod kar yoon akela,

jaise tumne meri dhadkan kabhi suni hi na thi.

Meri saansoon ke patte murjha rahe hain kuch iss tarha,

jaise tumhari roshni ke bina inmain zindagi hi na thi…

18 comments on “Kuch iss tarha…

  1. Hey somebody know Amit aka Kaviraj’s parents contact numbers. If we left him like this he may become modern Devdas (Who drinks only fruit beer – as per his previous posting). Hey Virah samrat, who cheated u this time. U better marry soon and write duets instead of virah geet.

  2. Hey bharat, you are absolutely right 🙂 I’ll try and find his home contact number…
    Amit bata de yaar ye aap beete kis ke liye likh raha hai????
    Nahi to ye bata de ki poem kahan se churayai hai…
    Agar dono hi baatein nahi hai to bharat thik hi keh raha hai ki to total Mr depression ho chuka hai aur tere ghar khabar pahuncha deni chahiye 🙂

  3. arreeee…..yaar ek imagination naam ki cheeze hoti hai. Main kissi ke viyog main nahi tadap raha….ye to meri chanchal man ki kalpana hai jo hichkole kha rahi hai.

  4. Disclaimer : After reading this poem, a few of my friends called up to make sure I was all right and not in a sulking mode. A assured them that I was alright and the only inspiration for this poem was the title of an Ekta Kapoor’s serial….which I have used as this poem’s title(without the extra K).
    I am happy with my life. Period!
    🙂

  5. hey amit…..pic bahut sahi hia……

    n poem toh ulti hai…..but yeh disclaimer kuch jach nahi raha….. 😉

    waiting for more postings of ur’s…lekin kuch happy happy poems ab….imagination divert karna next time se…. 🙂

  6. hi amit
    really yaar this bolg is too good , now i realise what i will miss if i do not read this.

    Raahe hayaat me kuch haasil to ho safar ka!
    Sahraaye dil ko mere ab gulistaan banade!!
    Afsana mere dil ka pesh-e-nazar hai tere!
    Chaahe khamosh hoja ya daastan banade!!

    really waiting for your next blog

    its too good keep it up

  7. i think u can imagine happy situations instead of this type of parting situations mr. virah raj. by the way who is this “chanchal”?

  8. @bharat: I thought you would ask who is “Kalpana”.
    Aneways, I would definitely write a funny poem the next time around.

  9. Its ok, but first tell me who Chanchal is? And I forgot to ask u when onwards u started seeing Ekta kappor’s serials. Is this starting step of a man in the process of marriage? Hey guys, please somebody explain me, I really dont know.

  10. The Poem is very nice… Kaviraj ban gaye ho…
    But aapne yeh nahin bataya bahi tak ki kisko soch ke likhi hai…. 🙂

    Waise acchha likh lete ho bahiya….

  11. Now this is called a “Poem”
    Very very beautiful…….Your best creation till date!!
    Written with lots of thought!!! Very very b’ful.
    I loved it.
    Keep the gud work going.

  12. are Amitanna….. kya ho gaya hai tuze??? jaldi se shadi kar le, nahi tera kucch thik nahi lag raha mereko….

    by the way, the poem is really good… but yaar agar ye teri ‘Kalpana’ji hi hai to ab tuze romantic kavita likhake ye saabit karana hoga. otherwise sure ho jaayega ki sahi main teri GF tuze chhod k gayi hai..

    so ready for the challenge???

  13. bhaia… mast poem likhi hai(shayad aapne)……waise to aapne mughe sunai bhi thi, par tab itna mazza nahi aya tha, as u were fast… aaaj mene aarama se time le kar pada hai mazza aa gaya….. aap publish kuin nahi karava dete kuch paise bhi kama loge….

    kya neeelu ke liye to nahi likhi????

  14. Bhaiya finally maine poem padh li but end tak neend aa gayi to shuru ka bhool gaya.. phirse koshish karoonga pakka…
    waise aap apne wele time ka acha istemal kar rahe ho…
    Good For You !!!!

  15. Guudu bhai bilkul sahi kaha… Pehle to Bhaiya khud bore ho rahe honge phir apne viyog ki kaplana ke saath illegal affair karke inhone pitaai khai hogi…rote rote ye poem likhi aur log saabhashiyan bhi de rahein hain… Hum dono ke jitna inhe koi nahin jaanta shayad iss liye…

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